EXPLANATION With adjectival phrases and clauses, problems occur when people try to put a number of adjectival phrases and/or clauses together. Our corrected model shows the correct sequence of information. The party's objective is:
In that sequence, the noun 'choices' is qualified by the adjectival phrase of young people ... and then 'people' is qualified by the phrase like my daughter. This sort of string of adjectival information can cause confusion if people get the sequence wrong and lose track of what is qualifying what. The result is clumsy synthesis such as in the typical error.
To solve the problem, we just need to sort out in our mind what the main noun is and then what the sequence of qualifiers is: e.g. the choices (noun) ... of young people ... like my daughter.