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10.3Tense confusion - present and past
TYPICAL ERROR The priests were infuriated by Galileo. They treated his idea as evil because it is against their religion. They forced him to confess that he is wrong.
CORRECTION The priests were infuriated by Galileo. They treated his idea as evil because it was against their religion. They forced him to confess that he was wrong.

EXPLANATION The word tense comes from the Middle English word tens, meaning time. In English, the main way of placing an action in time (i.e. in the past, the present or the future) is by varying the form of the verb. For example, swam indicates that the action happened in the past (it is past tense), swims sets the action in the present (it is present tense) and will swim sets it in the future (future tense).

If writing is to be coherent (logical), the time frame indicated by verbs (and any adverbs indicating time) needs to be consistent. In the sample correction above, present tense has been mixed with past tense. All the verbs need to be past tense.

In some languages, tense is not indicated by the verb but by other methods, such as using adverbs. While adverbs can add further information about the time frame in English, verbs are the main indicators. This section is an introductory discussion on the need to keep tenses consistent. The next three sections, 10.4–10.6, examine the role of specific verbs in maintaining tense cohesion.

Change the word in the box so that the tense of the statement is consistent.
aThe gunman swaggers through the saloon doors and stands just inside the entrance. Silence in the saloon.
bMy heart is pounding as I discreetly push up my sleeve and copying the scrawled equations from my arm into my exam paper.
cThat test gave me the highest result I had received all year, yet I that what I had done was wrong.
dWhen I first learnt about the civil war in Sudan, I it would be easy for people there to give up hope.
eIt was only when I arrived at school on Friday that I remembered I hadn’t fed the dog morning.
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