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2.1Detached adverbial clauses
TYPICAL ERROR The purpose of laws is to improve a civilisation's way of life. Though to do that they sometimes have to reduce individual freedoms.
CORRECTION The purpose of laws is to improve a civilisation's way of life, though to do that they sometimes have to reduce individual freedoms.

EXPLANATION To add information about verbs (to modify them) we can add adverbs, adverbial phrases and adverbial clauses. This is how we might modify the verb 'skidded'.

Adding an adverb:

The stuntman deliberately skidded the old motorbike.

Adding an adverbial phrase:

The stuntman deliberately skidded the old motorbike into the burning haystack.

Adding an adverbial clause (i.e. it has its own verb):

The stuntman deliberately skidded the old motorbike as he crashed into the burning haystack.

In the last example, a clause has been added. That adverbial clause is part of the longer sentence and so it should not be punctuated as a separate sentence.

Haystack

Adverbial clauses can be introduced by many different conjunctions, such as because, as, when, whenever, although, if and where. Just as arms cannot exist without a body, an adverbial clause cannot stand alone: it is a dependent subclause within a sentence; that is, it is a subordinate clause - and it is joined to the main sentence by a conjunction.

If an adverbial clause has been separated from a sentence, we say that the sentence has been fragmented. That is what has happened in the typical error above. The adverbial clause (though to do that they sometimes have to reduce individual freedoms) has been punctuated as a separate sentence, a fragment, instead of being included in the sentence.

Adverbial clauses are often marked off by a comma. Hence, the problem of fragmentation is possibly partly caused when people hear that pause in their mind and insert a full stop (instead of a comma).

Rewrite these examples so that the adverbial clause is included in the sentence to which it refers (i.e. so that the sentences are not fragmented).
aBoth of us are scared to face the we know that the truth will be painful.
bMany people devote their lives to the accumulation of few realise that real treasure comes from things that cannot be bought.
cThis problem also extends to secondary there is a great emphasis on preparing students for examinations.
dOften when we look back on experiences, we try to remember only the good negative experiences can also provide important insights.
eEveryone should learn how to do you never know when it might come in handy.
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